Saturday, October 5, 2013

Jina Park/Character Sketch/ Tue 1 p.m

My name is Jina Park. 21 years old. An unwilling and ordinary college students with medium tall. I studied at the art school when I was 16 years old. Just 5 years ago.

 

I remember when I came into my class. I was the second grade junior student of middle school. All my classmates were applauding to welcome me. I was very happy and introduced myself. "Hello everyone, my name is Jina Park. I am major in Sing and Dance. Nice to meet you guys." Then they said to me together. "Welcome to our class!" I felt very warm as a shy girl.

 

I had many classes every day. Physique, listening music, street dance, solfeggio class……etc. It was very busy but I very happy every day because I did what I love to do with who I like. We would unhappy because we could not dance very well, laughed loudly because someone was singing wrong a key. We had meals together, played together, cried together. We were like a big family.

 

In the time of all classmates considered which university of Art they would to go, there had a bad news for me that I had to go to Korea because my parents wanted me to live with them. I really hoped that I could stay here and went to university with my friends but I had no choice and I just could say goodbye to my friends.

It was so sad and let me crazy was my father let me learn English. I could not believe it. What was going on? I only learned English for two years. Now I can only learn to strong and study hard. And when I graduated I will go back to China.

1 comment:

  1. From: Wonpil Lee
    To: Jina Park
    Commented in accordance with Peer Response Form at p. 90-91

    1. Write one sentence to sum up what this person is like.
    You are not so happy because you has to study hard in Korea, so you are missing the time when you lived in China.

    2. List three details from essay that support your sentence in step 1.
    We had meals together, played together, cried together. We were like a big family.
    I really hoped that I could stay here and went to university with my friends but I had no choice and I just could say goodbye to my friends.
    It was so sad and let me crazy was my father let me learn English.

    3. a. What the person looks like
    You do not describe what you look like.

    b. What the person says
    "Hello everyone, my name is Jina Park. I am major in Sing and Dance. Nice to meet you guys."

    c. What the person does
    You studied at the art school in China, and you are studying English in Korea now.

    d. What other people say about the person
    You do not quote what other people say about you.

    4. Were there any things in this essay that you did not understand? If so, what were they?
    You tried to describe yourself in this essay. I am not quite sure whether you are Korean or Chinese. You said that your parents wanted to be with you, so you are now in Korea. Did you study in China alone? If so, why did you do so?
    5. Why do you think the writer chose to describe this particular person?
    You might think you are the right person who can exactly describe yourself. That’s why you chose to describe yourself, right?

    6. Write one or two question about the person described in this essay that you would like the writer to answer in the next draft.
    Do you have any good memory in Korea? If you have any, talk about it. It would be better to show us your personality if you describe a funny episode in Korea.

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