tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9194298662561862122.post6408665074308572438..comments2023-05-03T03:20:29.092-07:00Comments on Intermediate Writing (2) Fall 2013 5-6: Ju Ye-lam/Character sketch/ Tue 1p.mprofjbhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06809066317885065503noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9194298662561862122.post-30427868213457962122013-10-07T06:52:51.543-07:002013-10-07T06:52:51.543-07:00This person is very kind and caring. Some of the e...This person is very kind and caring. Some of the examples you provide are his outward appearances and the time you refused to talk to him.<br />The male has brown hair and bronze skin, and dresses casually. The person listens to your words and says things like "I really understood you and why you acted like that. But your attitude toward confliction is quite wrong. When you feel disappointed with someone, you have to try conversations with that person." He stresses communication and always has and open heart. You yourself thinks that he is a good role model as well.<br />Some things I could not understand were phrases like "He always rolled his eyes when I talked with him as if he did not want to miss anything what I was saying." or "e still remains in my mind because he is a good book to me".<br />I think you chose to describe him because he was a good influence to you, even if you eventually parted with him. A few things I would like to know more about your boyfriend is how he acted around other people, not just you. Also, if you could tell me about what he liked to do when he was with you would be nice as well. And just in curiosity, maybe you could tell me what kind of music he liked, since you mentioned his guitar and all?<br /><br />Good work!<br /><br />Young-Lee SeoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9194298662561862122.post-5456896453538553602013-10-07T02:52:13.125-07:002013-10-07T02:52:13.125-07:00I can easily imagine your ex-boyfriend from your d...I can easily imagine your ex-boyfriend from your description because it reveals his personality as well. I think metaphor used in the last paragraph is very good, I understand the nuance and I catched that the meaning of relationship between you and him was like a reading a book. But could you specify the line 'he is a good book to me' ? it is slightly too sudden(?) to me.<br /><br />Jungha Lee StudentAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com