tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9194298662561862122.post5489664193219642650..comments2023-05-03T03:20:29.092-07:00Comments on Intermediate Writing (2) Fall 2013 5-6: Young-Lee Seo/Place/Tue 1pmprofjbhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06809066317885065503noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9194298662561862122.post-31837220102756744682013-10-28T02:08:21.730-07:002013-10-28T02:08:21.730-07:001. What did you like best about this essay? Be as ...1. What did you like best about this essay? Be as specific as possible.<br />I like this essay because write described what playground looked like very in detail. <br />2. Did the writer describe the place clearly? List any parts that were not clear to you.<br />It was very clear.<br />3. Did the writer appeal to the different sense? List two sensory details that you especially liked.<br />- The bright yellow rays from the sunlight filtered in through the vivid viridian canopy, <br />- two yellow and red colored straight slides were always being occupied, but the blue spiral slide was by far the most popular<br />4. How would you describe the mood or the atmosphere of this place?<br />exciting, enjoyable, vibrant<br />5. Why do you think the writer chose to write about this place?<br />Writer wrote about playground because she had many precious memories in this place during her childhood. <br />6. How could the writer improve this essay when he or she revises? Make only one suggestion.<br />Every detail was very vivid, but it might be better to describe playground using other senses like smell or sound.<br /><br />-Yeonsoo, Seo Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com