tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9194298662561862122.post1856733778234247572..comments2023-05-03T03:20:29.092-07:00Comments on Intermediate Writing (2) Fall 2013 5-6: Lee Seung-Hwan / Place / Tue 1 p.mprofjbhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06809066317885065503noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9194298662561862122.post-4108404749004852082013-12-15T04:55:56.553-08:002013-12-15T04:55:56.553-08:001. What did you like best about this essay? Be as ...1. What did you like best about this essay? Be as specific as possible.<br />I like how he constantly went back to the playground after time. It seems to describe the time passing.<br />2. Did the writer describe the place clearly? List any parts that were not clear to you.<br />Everything was clear.<br />3. Did the writer appeal to the different sense? List two sensory details that you especially liked.<br />I liked how he described the surroundings, but there is no other sensory feel. Maybe metal, for touch?<br />4. How would you describe the mood or the atmosphere of this place?<br />Slightly sad, nostalgic, longing.<br />5. Why do you think the writer chose to write about this place?<br />It is the place that ties him and his friend together.<br />6. How could the writer improve this essay when he or she revises? Make only one suggestion.<br />Maybe be more vivid when writing something related to his friend.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com