Sunday, October 6, 2013

So young Park / Character sketch class 56

   She was sitting across the room. She was dressed in silk. Her features were strong but very delicate. She portrayed grace and poise. when I looked at her, my heart would start beating very fast. She had   big eyes which would look at you with all the attention she could possibly give you. she was wearing    white, which gave her a very calm appearance. When people would walk pass by her they would all      look back. It was not that she was not beautiful, but she really looked normal. It was just that there was something about her presence that made others want to look back and see this girl. She had an aura of peacefulness around her. When I saw her, I felt like actually approaching her and just getting to know hwo she really was. She was just very mesmerizing.

   It was not only her looks that had caught my eye, but her gestures. She was so gentle when she       would do certain hand gestures or feet gestures. She was just very at ease and looked very easy to talk to. It was nothing like the uncomfortable situation that we are often confronted with when we meet           someone new. Actually, it was the opposite of actually wanting to get to know her because I was just     very curious of what kind of personality she would have. She looked like she could be a very good         friend and listener. I really like those kind of people because it is sometimes often very difficult to find     someone that is willing to listen to your story and what you have to say instead of constantly be the one  to talk all the time.

   In the end, I did get a chance to actually talk to her so I was very happy I did. She was what I thought she would be. She was very jolly and happy. She had a really nice personality. It was very easy to talk to her and i was not afraid to talk to her. I had a very good time and we ended up talking to each other for   longer than we expected to. It ended up being a load of fun!  I was really glad that I did approach her     and talk to her.

2 comments:

  1. 1. She is attractive, comfortable and very easy to approach and talk.
    2. -It was just that there was something about her presence that made others want to look back and see this girl.
    -She was just very at ease and looked very easy to talk to.
    - It was nothing like the uncomfortable situation that we are often confronted with when we meet someone new.
    3. a. What the person looks like
    She had big eyes which would look at you with all the attention she could possibly give you.
    4. All was clear:)
    5. Because she is a person who cause the writer to have a curiosity and the writer had a great experience with her.
    6. What did her voice sound like?

    By Ju Ye-lam

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  2. 1. Write one sentence to sum up what this person is like.

    A person who looks normal but has attractive aura.


    2. List three details from the essay that support your sentence in step 1.

    (1) when I looked at her, my heart would start beating very fast.

    (2) When people would walk pass by her they would all look back.

    (3) It was not that she was not beautiful, but she really looked normal.


    3. What the person looks like

    She had big eyes which would look at you with all the attention she could possibly give you.


    What the person does

    She was so gentle when she would do certain hand gestures or feet gestures


    4. Were there any things in this essay that you did not understand? If so, what were they?

    'It was nothing like the uncomfortable situation that we are often confronted with when we meet someone new. '

    I don't get this sentence.. wish it was more clear.


    5. Why do you think the writer chose to describe this particular person?

    I think because she is the one the writer wants to get acquainted with.


    6. Write one or two questions about the person described in this essay that you would like the writer to answer in the next draft.


    I want to know about some actual quotes she made.


    Lee Seung-Hwan

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